April 15th, 2005

Kitties

Opening monologue, draft one.

Feel free to critique, or not, but remember that it's supposed to be spoken and is written with that in mind. Also note that I speak fast with a clipped New York accent so some of the longer transitional passages are there for proper spacing because I can race over a line in two or three seconds. I'm also not in love with this, I'm just working through possible routines and trying to develop material.

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Another script

Here's the unstoppable Bob script I was working on. Not done yet, obviously, and needs some trimming towards the front, but for the first twenty pages I think it's coming along alright.

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